So on March 8, my department (OWL VFD) hosted a Saint
Baldrick's event. It was participated with many other departments in our area,
from Dale City, Dumfries, and even a DC department. Some of you who have not
heard of Saint Baldrick's, it is an organization that raises money and
awareness for kids with cancer as well as cancer research with kids. As their
website says "St. Baldrick’s is home of the head-shaving event. It’s an
easy and fun way to raise money for a very serious cause—like a walk athon, but
without the blisters. "
I have a video to help you get another idea of what exactly
Saint Baldrick's does.
My department has sponsored having a Saint Baldricks event
for about 8 years. My department started participating in the event, because
one of our department member couples, baby Zach was born with having a brain
and Spinal Cord tumor. At just a baby this family had to deal with their new
born having cancer. Now this is a nightmare to all new parents, hearing that
your baby has cancer. Zach is now 19 years old; he was left with many obstacles
like having one side of his body weaker than the other as well as a few other
things. Zach was able to overcome all of this and is now a Fireman. He has had
troubles and has overcome so much. Zach and his family are not only part of our
OWL VFD family; he is also going to JMU now. Both his parents are life members
in the department meaning they have been with our department for more than 18 years;
they still actively participate with in the department and are the nicest
people. Below is a Pic of Zach,
We also sponsor some other little boys. Now for my
department we try to make it fun and like a party when we are fundraising.
There is a live band that plays Irish music and since it is close to Saint
Patrick's Day we have it Saint patty's theme. We wear green; have lots of food
and drinks there. We usually have an auction going to help raise money. We
auction many different things like autograph baseballs to customized mail
boxes. We also sell t-shirts and
sweaters and we cut are hair. Typically Girls will not always shave but they will
cut their hair. Guys will shave though and we also donate hair if it is long
enough and follows the rules for donating. Like non-colored, not layered, and
more than a certain length.
My department has not released how much we raised yet, but
when I left we were already over $30,000 for children cancer research.
The Childhood Cancer Ripple Effect. The Childhood Cancer Ripple Effect. Saint Baldrick's, 15 Jan. 2013. Web. 18 Mar. 2013.

You definitely have some nice content and details here, especially when you start describing the St. Baldrick's event at your fire station. I would recommend reading each paragraph and looking for ways to watch repetition (see especially the second big paragraph) and adding more "for example" details. Just remember our discussion from today's meeting. I think it crosses over here as well.
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